Wednesday, October 31, 2012

Show Not Tell

This Morning, Room 20 yet again, did another Show Not Tell. As students, we had to describe what we could see in this picture about the setting and the characters. BUT.. We had to show not tell. That only means we couldn't give the idea away, we had to give hints. Now, you tell Me... Do you get the idea from my Paragraph? 

“SEARCH FOR HIM THAT WAY!” I heard a soldier command. With sweat sliding down the side of my face, I continuously ran puffing and panting. The ground was shrouded in wet, sticky mud. As I stealthily peeked through the damp tree branches, water droplets began to fall and slide down my hair. The clouds darkened.

2 comments:

  1. Hi Sylvia,

    I wouldve known straight away that this was the picture from your paragraph because it was described perfectly...

    Keep up the GREAT WORK!
    Grace

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  2. Hey Sylvia,

    I really liked how you have described your picture and the introduction of this story. I will love to read more of these Show Not Tell stories, I also loved your vocab you used in this story. Keep the good writing up its AWESOME!. Happy Writing!

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